Comments : My Pendant Cross

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark
    Excellent work as always!!!
    i can almost imagine you wondering around fiddling almost with your necklace deep in thought..

    Well done.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    That certainty does answer the question Mark, and it's really interesting to see what it means to you.
    A lovely poem with your usual wonderful descriptions and observations :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This definitely answers the question and I could imagine you walking around with it too as Naomi could just twiddling it around your finger in a trance until someone says "excuse me sir tell me about your pendant" or something like that then you go into song and dance about it (maybe even literally like a musical haha) some fantastic descriptions well done

    Take care
    Em x

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I am with Em on this one, Mark. I like the piece, it was uplifting to me as well, learning of the value of your cross to you. Your unique language is really beautiful that's maybe why Em think you'd answer it like a musical. :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    *a mirror would

    Great write Mark. I'm not religious myself, but I appreciate what your cross means to you and how therapeutic it seems to be in your life. A pendant with a purpose.

    Great job,
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Mark,

    Putting my religious beliefs aside, this is truly an amazing personal tale. And full admiration to you within this story, and very well told I may add
    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Mark, Loved what you wrote in 3rd and 4th stanza.
    Another brilliant write.
    This poem is a blessing itself.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is the kind of spiritual inspiration everyone needs
    and when we have that all can be conquered! I liked this from
    start to end...a lovely read for me this morning...

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Such great inspiration.Add to my favorite. All the very best.

  • 6 years ago

    by CânnâBîsh

    Such an inspiring peice.

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment.

    "My Pendant Cross" By Mark 10 points

    I'm going to work backwards on this one by Mark, because I can, and because in my last week as a judge Mark just blew me away.

    To begin with the end. Faith, guidance and love are all things that we truly desire, religious or otherwise, I'm glad you have yours. Sometimes things seem bleak but your faith seems to have pulled you through.

    The contents before are simply beautiful, thoughts recored in word. They give fantastic images of joy, and worry, happiness and fear, and I dare say a little misery and sadness.

    So to the beginning.

    This is what truly hooked me!

    To be questioned on your faith is rather shocking. Everyone has the right to choose their own. That you responded so gracefully here is the measure of you.

    Well done (10)