Comments : Trickle

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow Craig! This is powerful stuff and could have so many hidden meanings pertaining to perhaps, powerful people too. I guess we all begin as rivulets, but few make it to the sea ... and what do they do with that power once they get there?
    This has given me much to think about ... love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 4 weeks ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      You pretty much got

      Craig x

    • 4 weeks ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Ben.

      You're right to think in metaphors, if you think of a trickle as one person and the sea as a collective you can kinda get where my head was going with this one.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Craig, I love this! It is the little things and experiences we accumulate throughout the years (or tributaries) that make us stronger. (Roaring seas). I don't know whether the metaphors I have highlighted were meant or whether this is just a fun poem, but that's what I'm taking...so there!

    Take care and all the very best,

    Ben

  • 4 weeks ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Lovely, clever, effervescent write! Love love this poem!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      I've not seen your profile before but when time allows I'll have a read of your stuff

      Craig

  • 4 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Craig - wonderful, wonderful *claps*
    This is amazing and full of metaphores yet also very cute ...
    Love it! Well done.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love this too, Craig. Life's a journey, along the way we grow into better versions of our selves...or we make something out of the very tiny bits of what we have. Being the sea now I guess you mean to say you are now an overcomer. :-)

    • 4 weeks ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Mel. This one isn't really about me.

      It's about people, and how as a collective they become way stronger and more powerful than they ever would be as an individual.

      Craig x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this and the way the little droplet grows slowly as it journeys into the sea. Very clever and captivating piece. Milly x

    • 4 weeks ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Morning Milly

      Glad you enjoyed, quite a simple little poem really

      Craig x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Alice

    Really like this one!