Like a Reflex

by mossgirl19   Oct 26, 2017


Like a reflex, my eyes would gaze at the moon at night,
Because like a reflex, my mind is lost in a time and space
only understood by you and me.

Like a reflex, my thoughts would drift
on the nights you made little tulips out of the moonlight
and adorned my heart with it;
or on all of the nights we would stare
at the cascading waters illuminated by the moon,
Like a reflex, the memory of these would carve a smile in me.

Like a reflex, my mind would wonder
if the moon over there somehow reminded you of me-
if somehow it made your heartbeat long for mine
If somehow a part of you would only be fulfilled by my presence.

Ah, yes, like a reflex my heart would scream
I love you, I love you, I love you
…because it’s the truth.

I guess you are right in saying
I am only a poet living in many clichés,
overusing these words, these phrases,

because all I can do now is but repeat myself…
Like a reflex.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, I just love this! When we are in a relationship there are so many things that are just you and him. When that relationship is no longer our minds still keep those loops going. I really liked how you repeated certain phrases and certain words. It really lends well with your write-

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    While I am definitely not a fan of the repetition (it was a little too bland to really get at the heart of where you were going in my opinion) at the beginning of so many stanzas I think this is still a decently penned poem and I wish you well in the weekly contest.

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I really like your honesty, Maddie. Thank you.

      Thanks all for your comments. :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful Mel
    Loved it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Mel this is wonderful, I love the repetition. ..the nostaligia..the love expressed. Beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Clever writing, Mel.

    Take care,

    Ben

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