Water-colour of love

by Michael   Oct 26, 2017


Coruscating-
within irises an
image beholds.

A picture.

For she,
is a water-lily,
dancing upon a
hemp-twilled lake;
her cotton petals
flutter; dilating a
vision of colours,
as she pirouettes
a softness of
seductive tones.

tiny bubbles
of pollen float
bursting tastes of
her scent upon my lips.

Her voice whispers;
with a subtle breeze-
a silent melody,
so sensitive.

Snowflakes fall-
melting..

..moments of fresh
memories.

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  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, just lovely! The visuals you wove are breathtaking. Well done-

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you miss Brenda :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    WOW. that is all

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em x

  • 7 months ago

    by Mark

    Michael, the imagery! I cannot add anymore, Scotts comment is spot on.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Scott Cole

    Michael I do believe without a doubt that this poem ur beautiful mind has crafted is the most tranquil poem I have read on this site, it's just simply moving. If I had a vote I would nominate it in a second. Awesome job man i dont know how a mind could could up with such effervescent thoughts my hat is off to u man!!!!

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Scott,
      Thank you for such wonderful comments and compliments my friend :)

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh la la... Michael, first of all I really like that this is left aligned. This is so beautiful. The structure is captivating...as it controlled the pace by which this is read. I love how the words slowly unfold, as Kitty puts it, this is swoon-worthy. Genius, yes...or shall I say 'old' genius. Loved it! It's perfect actually. :-)

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Old yes..
      not sure about genius, but thank Miss Mel :)x

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