A Happy Barf (senryu)

by Ben Pickard   Oct 29, 2017


carousels and swings
remind us of youthful joy
and puddles of sick

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Ben Pickard 2017

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  • 6 days ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I remember them days. We could not get enough and the part of getting sick I also remember. We had such a great time. It is a true joy to watch kids. Thank you for sharing. All the best

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Haha... so nice, Ben. I am however a fan of these so no bad stomach for me. So nostalgic...ahh took me back to a time.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Mel - glad you enjoyed.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    another powerful nostalgic write

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Ben, how true, lol....loved this!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    ohh how acurate!!!
    however, i still fidn myself enjoying carousels and swings.. Ive just learned not to eat before i go on them!! haha

    This cheered me up greatly for a Monday morning Benny. Thanks

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