Comments : A Happy Barf (senryu)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Hahaha Ben! I'm proper 'larfing' here! (See what I did there?)

    To evoke such memories with so few words is pretty bloomin clever! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks, Kitty. I never did have the stomach for them...

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well captured lol. I don't like them either. So can relate. Milly x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Jamie

    I must admit the title gave me a chuckle. I am going to read into this too much because yiu did well to write it all out. I can imagine the youth feeling this way though. Count me in with the group who couldn't stomach it. Because i don't like spinning in circles. I get vertigo easy. But i liked this a lot. Well written.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Jamie, Brenda and Naomi

  • 3 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    ohh how acurate!!!
    however, i still fidn myself enjoying carousels and swings.. Ive just learned not to eat before i go on them!! haha

    This cheered me up greatly for a Monday morning Benny. Thanks

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Ben, how true, lol....loved this!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Em

    another powerful nostalgic write

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Haha... so nice, Ben. I am however a fan of these so no bad stomach for me. So nostalgic...ahh took me back to a time.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Mel - glad you enjoyed.

  • 1 week ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I remember them days. We could not get enough and the part of getting sick I also remember. We had such a great time. It is a true joy to watch kids. Thank you for sharing. All the best