Another Day

by Some Random Human   Oct 29, 2017


If you are gone,
what's the point in this,
I can't move on,
I just reminisce,
it feels so wrong,
when it's you I miss,
it takes too long,
to cease to exist,

I wake up to another day,
I kneel down, but can't find faith,
a lost cause, I'm such a waste,
what's the point in it anyway,

It cuts so deep,
it makes me bleed,
I can not sleep,
I'm lost in dream,
I sit and weep,
you're gone indeed,
I can not keep,
this silent scream,

I wake up to another day,
I kneel down, but can't find faith,
a lost cause, I'm such a waste,
what's the point in it anyway,

A cold night, a cold day,
it's like the winter won't go away,
it's like the winter came to stay,
it's like the winter knows my name,
a cold night, a colder day,
it's like the winter, it won't go away,
it's like the winter, it came to stay,
it's like the winter, it knows my name,
it knows my name,
it's like the winter, it knows my name,

I wake up to another day,
I kneel down, still can't find faith,
it's like the winter, it came to stay,
it's like the winter, it knows my name...

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Some Random Human, this is some heartbreaking write. The repetition here worked well...I liked the intensity being built up with the use of it. The flow also is good, with beautiful subtle rhyming.

    Being a fan of repetition too, I felt the ending was a little weak. I wish the last two lines were:

    'it's like the winter, it knows my name
    what's the point...in it anyway'

    I just felt it would end up with more hopelessness with that. :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by CânnâBîsh

    This would make a great song..if it isn't already. I like the repetition gives it character. Can sense the sadness & lost feeling you portrayed well. The rhyming patters made it fun to read. Great job!

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