A Trick Of The Light? (syntuit)

by Ben Pickard   Oct 29, 2017


The hour has gone back
but my bottle is still dry
when the sun goes down

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Ben Pickard 2017

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  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Is this any way connected to your love to drink, Ben? I think that this is quite heavy...bearing much meaning.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      It is, Mel, but it is not entirely literal. I'm not a raving alcoholic yet, but by heaven, I'm working on it, dear woman!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    very clever Ben..

    it seems that because we lost the hour to 'alcoholics' it doesn't matter much because that bottle will be gone come daybreak regardless... sad but extremely powerful.

    Take care,
    Em

  • 2 weeks ago

    by C J T

    All good things come to an end eventually. Intense for only few words.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Interesting write Ben. I sense the sadness of the empty bottle and a long night ahead, alone. Well done-

  • 2 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny
    3 short lines, yet so intense and deep.

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