Song On The Somme

by Mark   Oct 30, 2017


A brisk haze lingers on the Somme before daybreak
Silhouettes parade in ritual fashion;
marching spirited fallen soldiers
Humming baritones, tuning from a war long gone
To us.

Hymns are hindered by densely hazed ridden ether
Fog and song colliding as death - powder and musk once fused.
The departed still combat; with duty engraved on mounds.
Crabgrass; the life adorning the buried boned remnants;
Accustomed to solemnly choirs - oscillating with familiarity
As some were there and tasted the bodily fallout of war.

Battle won and the song sweeps over a lush eerie Somme.
A hush; helpless to the will of turmoil filled winds,
Collide leaves tunefully - rustling to the beat of soulful outpouring
Pulsing, from roots stemming deep into the maze of entombment
Flocks of black sparrows disperse from the mesmerizing murmurs.
The brass choir can now be grasped:

This is where we lie
Patriot's graved abroad
For this is where we die
Flesh duly thawed.
To the Somme - we tie;
To linger forever flawed
Until our home - we fly.

Our homeland! We cry
For 'tis reason we fought,
Splintered and bled dry
That death us wrought.
Let us glide o'er hills high,
Sever the strings so taut
That grace then bid us bye.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow!
    Mark,
    This is simply a truly amazing piece. The story about the river Somme and the battles of ghosts, songs that are sung of heroes. Beautiful words and expression throughout.
    Pleased this is nominated, and well done
    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Marky Mark - what a wonderful piece. You have only been with this site for a short while, but i am alreasy seeing great improvement in your pieces.. they are slowly becoming more fine tuned and the flow is excellent. Paired with a fantastic story, and well you get this piece.

    glad its nominated!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow. Such a vivid tale and a wonderful tone. Superb write here.

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, what a wonderful write! A battle of long ago still with whispers and remnants lingering in the fog and cold. Visually on point. 2 typos possibly? The second stanza, should hums be hymns? Also hinded, be hidden? If not, my apologies.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I was there as I read this, Mark, so rich and vivid is your description and resultant imagery. Fantastic.

    All the best,

    Ben

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