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by Meena Krish Oct 30, 2017
put you to
rest, no more can
I burden your blood to
spill on my behalf every night;
a faithful friend
veiled my dreams with your best
not once revealing my wretched plight;
and depressed and your
fair-haired lady can’t bear
on her chest the many rusted moon lights;
bury you both
etch upon my table -
pen and paper laid to rest without a fight!
by Robert Gardiner
A Great Write Meena!!!
Ms. Meena what a wonderful write this is. Beautiful concept and the structure is as beautiful too.
Beautiful structure and flow. Wonder poetic idea behind this piece.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Beautiful words in a beautiful structure Meena :-) I'm glad it's nominated! :-) x
by Dagmar Wilson
Emotions so deep and the letting go part well described. All the very best.
by The Po whet
by Ben Pickard