Comments : You Want It Darker

  • 11 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I've included some snippets of the song in this as they were just to good to omit.

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Craig what an epic of a tribute to a hero.
    Knowing the subject this well, and incorporating lyrics too.
    Well done fella

    Michael :)

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude.

      The guy was awesome even in old age. Adding some of the lyrics felt a bit like cheating but

      Magnified, sanctified
      Be thy holy name
      Vilified, crucified
      In the human frame.

      Spine tingling stuff and suits my mood rather well too

      Craig

  • 11 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Whoa Craig! Yes epic, dark, twisty, mysterious, intriguing, a little bit scary and perfect timing for Halloween!
    Absolutely brilliant! I hope it's nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      Totally forgot about Halloween lol accidental perfect timing

  • 11 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    My...I'm just learning about all this now! I like the
    repetition "We Kill the flame" , it gives an added effect
    and I must say this is the longest poem I've read with full
    details and spot on rhymes!

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      Despite its length it was really easy to write.

      https://youtu.be/v0nmHymgM7Y

      The link will take you to the song

      Craig x

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, what a dark write. It flowed beautifully and your rhyming all the way through-well done-

  • 9 months ago

    by Tony

    I don't know how the heck I missed this?! It was so good it made me Google who the man was. Amazing tribute. Better than amazing, but literally can't think of a word right now.

  • 9 months ago

    by Tony

    I don't know how the heck I missed this?! It was so good it made me Google who the man was. Amazing tribute. Better than amazing, but literally can't think of a word right now. And the bass in that song... I love it.

    • 9 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude.

      It's a pretty amazing song and one of those that you can't imagine anyone else singing and doing it justice

      Craig