Comments : Moonbeams Of Lark:

  • 3 months ago

    by ddavidd

    The moon is so addictive in this . Feel it is venting through my eyeballs.

  • 3 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "As the moonbeams
    played laser tag
    with
    my soggy eyeballs,"

    This is great Scott ... only in poetry would a line like this make sense! Super write! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 3 months ago

    by Mark

    Love the format and rhyme scheme. Very descriptive and great vocabulary!