Distanced.

by C J T   Oct 31, 2017


Distanced..
So far apart.
No matter
The distance.
You're in
my heart.

Loved..
So loved you are
By me,
always.
Ill be your
solace.

Heart..
I'll beat for you,
When you're
feeling weak.
I'll keep
pushing you.

Blood..
So dark but
So bold.
without you
I'm dead.

Addiction..
So addicted
To you.
You're a drug
That I need
To see the
Days through.

High..
So high when
I'm by your side.
I miss everything
About you
tonight..

Distanced..
So far apart.
No matter
The distance.
You're in
my heart.

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  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Well formatted and a touching love poem.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank you!!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    CJT
    Like the style and the flow of your poem, with a heart-felt message throughout
    Well done.
    Michael :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A great title, given that the only distance between you is physical ... he's right there with you, in your heart - couldn't be closer. Great write! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank u

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    CJT...a beautifully crafted work. I loved that the opening and ending stanzas are the same. For this piece I think it fitted well.

    Here I may go again, hehe, but you know this is such a lovely poem... I think this stanza here is unnecessary:

    Blood..
    So dark but
    So bold.
    without you
    I'm dead.

    It kind of interfered with the gentle tone, blood being dark.

    But nonetheless a great piece. :-)

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank u. I kinda wondered about that as I was typing it out. Haha

  • 2 weeks ago

    by ddavidd

    I like how you played with the relation of notions and emotions.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by C J T

      Thank u

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