Comments : What A Love Letter Might Say:

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Wow this is the second or third poem about the romance of pen and paper this week. Such popular subject, but yours has special uniqueness and fresh angle. I like the vision that any romance is as personal as it is universal. Seeing the dialectic of that separation and unity, their dependency and their denial, in this, is refreshing to me.
    I know there are more to this than what I mentioned
    Always good to read from you Scott

    A question: Haha What about the romance of fingers and keyboards?

    • 6 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      Thanks man I like ur new poem.as well, beautifully written!!!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    This is an unique and wonderfully written take on pen to paper. Poetically describing the reverse of the phrase. Great write!

    • 6 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      The paper is talking to the pen, hence paper to pen!!!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Mark

      Yep the paper to pen is the reverse of the phrase pen to paper. Love it!

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Scott, other than the very clever 'paper to pen' phrase ... this is a great poem about losing love (which obviously isn't great ... but I digress!)

    In the 5th stanza: "Why my once vacate heart now beats like a drum." Did you mean 'vacant'?

    I can really feel the pain of losing a love here ... a beautifully written poem :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Glenn G

    I feel your pain. I have been there, still think about her 15 years later. Good write.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Scott

    A wonderful rhyming piece of emotions that you have been through
    Well done fella
    Michael :)