Comments : Loco-emotion

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Love this Kitty. You took me with you, watching the passing scenery and leaving troubles behind. Great write

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks so much Mark :-) x
      =^.^=

      Edit: just saw that you nominated this Mark! That's lovely and I'm really grateful! Thank you x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty K

    Another great rhyming piece from you, letting your mind wander and leaving the troubles behind
    Nice one lady
    much love
    Michael x :)

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    "The further the journey takes me
    The more I can disappear"
    For me this is the peak of the piece. The obviousness of the fact that: 'the farther you go, the further you disappear,' have a great visual effect on the reader: seeing the disappearance is real. Though the poet herself seem not believeing that, because in the next stanza she finishes with this: "Just for a few days without a care." meaning she is really looking for a breather not a complete departure.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks ddavidd, sometimes a few days is all that's needed :-)
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Evanescent Moon

    This is an amazing piece, really quite captivating. It's beautiful and it's almost like I can put myself there, watching her. Everyone needs a break now and then, "just for a few days without a care" as you so put it. Just a little escape from reality :) a lovely piece, my dear. Xx

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks for your lovely comments Evanescent :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    We all need some "me time" to gather our thoughts and rejuvenate. I could picture myself by the ocean. Enjoyed reading. All the best

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Dagmar, I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Looking forward to a trip...wow... I could really use one myself right now. I love this, Kitty!

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lol ... I already had a little one, it was lovely! Thanks Mel :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    what a lovely piece Kitty. We all need some alone time on the road with no cares in the world. Excellently expressed here.

    Well done

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Kitty this is awesome.

    I think we all could do with escaping sometimes. Even if it's just for a little while.

    Sometimes I find that life can get on top of me and in this case I just feel I need to get away from people. Some would argue that my life is pretty solitary due to work. However I still have to deal with people.

    Anyway fantastic work and favorites deffo x

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Craig, flattered to be in your faves :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Alice

    Really captures how it feels to have a relaxing little escape. The tone of the poem is so consistently conveyed.