Comments : Cold memories

  • 3 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ouch Michael! I can really feel the confusion and pain of realising you've been betrayed, it's so hurtful
    A heart wrenching but beautifully crafted poem from you x
    =^.^=

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K
      lovely comments as ever :)x

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Being betrayed by someone close to your heart is devastating it can crush you. Not to mention the trust and respect is gone. Thank you for sharing and I hope it is just a poem. Take care and hugs.

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    'It felt like an icy draught;
    sweeping through my life,
    with sharp icicles that
    fell from the ceiling;
    penetrating a deep
    bluntness right into me.'

    Michael...this is a stunning stanza! A heart wrenching tale beautifully told...:-)

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    ohh a poem about betrayal.. :(
    this made me feel like i was on the receiving end.. the emotion put into this piece is astounding!

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you nams :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Mark

    Ah....this takes me back to a relationship of old. Beautiful language as always Michael, I've no more nominations, I hope someone does nominate.

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark, always appreciate your comments :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, a heartfelt write about lost love and betrayal. It's so hard when the enemy lies right next to you. Hugs-

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Hugs back lady and Thank you Miss Brenda :)x