Comments : Cold memories

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ouch Michael! I can really feel the confusion and pain of realising you've been betrayed, it's so hurtful
    A heart wrenching but beautifully crafted poem from you x
    =^.^=

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K
      lovely comments as ever :)x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Being betrayed by someone close to your heart is devastating it can crush you. Not to mention the trust and respect is gone. Thank you for sharing and I hope it is just a poem. Take care and hugs.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    'It felt like an icy draught;
    sweeping through my life,
    with sharp icicles that
    fell from the ceiling;
    penetrating a deep
    bluntness right into me.'

    Michael...this is a stunning stanza! A heart wrenching tale beautifully told...:-)

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    ohh a poem about betrayal.. :(
    this made me feel like i was on the receiving end.. the emotion put into this piece is astounding!

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you nams :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Ah....this takes me back to a relationship of old. Beautiful language as always Michael, I've no more nominations, I hope someone does nominate.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark, always appreciate your comments :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, a heartfelt write about lost love and betrayal. It's so hard when the enemy lies right next to you. Hugs-

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Hugs back lady and Thank you Miss Brenda :)x