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by Kitty Cat Lady
Ouch Michael! I can really feel the confusion and pain of realising you've been betrayed, it's so hurtful
A heart wrenching but beautifully crafted poem from you x
Thank you Miss Kitty K
lovely comments as ever :)x
by Dagmar Wilson
Being betrayed by someone close to your heart is devastating it can crush you. Not to mention the trust and respect is gone. Thank you for sharing and I hope it is just a poem. Take care and hugs.
Thank you Miss Dagmar :)
'It felt like an icy draught;
sweeping through my life,
with sharp icicles that
fell from the ceiling;
penetrating a deep
bluntness right into me.'
Michael...this is a stunning stanza! A heart wrenching tale beautifully told...:-)
Thank you Miss Mel :)
ohh a poem about betrayal.. :(
this made me feel like i was on the receiving end.. the emotion put into this piece is astounding!
Thank you nams :)
Ah....this takes me back to a relationship of old. Beautiful language as always Michael, I've no more nominations, I hope someone does nominate.
Thanks Mark, always appreciate your comments :)
Michael, a heartfelt write about lost love and betrayal. It's so hard when the enemy lies right next to you. Hugs-
Hugs back lady and Thank you Miss Brenda :)x