Comments : Part Two

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi, as sad as this is, it sounds like you dad really is deservedly dear to you. Cling to that - he is in your corner and some people have no one.

    pm me whenever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you Benny - It still isnt quite done, but I seem to keep letting the memories flood back emotions i thought were gone.

      And you are correct :) some people have noone.

      Thank you Benny. And same to you. if you ever need a chat..

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    :-( such a sad piece. The glimpses of light is your love for your dad. Really great write Nams, big hugs

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh this was hard to read Nams :-( it warms me though to know that your dad is there for you always, through your very worst times.
    Sending hugs x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow nams
    Part two really gives a sadness and with part one an incredible and painful piece. Such raw openess and again thank you for sharing. I will nominate this one, but not another vote left for the first one sorry
    Much love and warmth
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks michael. And for the nomination!
      I didnt actually do it for that - ive just had it on my mind lately and the way to get it all out is write :)

  • 6 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I wish I could help you be happier, but all I can do is love and support you along our life's journey! Look forward to the day you get an xbox and I can kick your ass in Halo! :)

    The piece itself did feel a bit rushed, like it hurt while you were writing it -- which, content wise, I can definitely see that being the case. I feel like every verse here could make a poem of its own, and maybe that would be a nice project to undertake. I also imagine there is a lot of content here that impacts you on a daily basis and makes your search for happiness even that much harder. Ever-curious how our lives end up when we're old and wrinkly, I hope you will start to look forward more than looking back. Don't beat yourself up over the past; you are where you are now and we love you for the N that we know. Just the way you are, scars and all. <3

    Much love,
    S

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      S - lovely lovely S.. soon i promise!!

      Obviously theres still much to tell!! As im now 27.. haha but i am always here for you too my love!! And i love you and everyone here..

      I actually stopped because emotions were high and i was rushing to get it all out.. this time of year is always a trip down memory lane..

      Much love back S

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Nams, I have read the first one but have not commented yet...really this is a sad write. I cannot imagine what your family has been thru, Nams but all these things have in one way or another made you the beautiful person that you are. From what I read you have a great dad, you are blessed to have one. I hope you patch things up... I grew up with my grandparents and have always wondered what would it feel like having a father while growing up.

    Sending love to you, Nams.

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you. Dad and i are fine :) theres much more left to tell - im just struggling with it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Ok Nams, just like Lady Mel, I have read the first one but haven't commented yet. Still trying to process this. I think this is really a positive thing and a brave thing to do. It's good to get this out, purge the past, look forward to the future. You are incredibly strong, it takes a lot to go through what you have. Your dad sounds amazing! He truly loves you and just wants the best for you. I will comment more, I am at work right now buried in work, sigh. .

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    <3