Sorry Man

by Everlasting   Nov 5, 2017

It’s not you

it’s her hips:
a pendulum
in the formed of broken stairs
that have hypnotized you
into believing
that you can climb
your way
to her


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  • 11 months ago

    by Walter

    I really like this powerful piece
    Well done

  • 1 year ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Short but very descriptive
    Nice poem

    • 1 year ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you for reading guys. It’s much appreciated.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done-I love the way you wove this together.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my...cleverly done. Cute and striking little piece.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is extremely powerful

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