Comments : Overturn

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Mobile as peas on a child's plate
    Beautiful

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some excellent writing here, not least the line Paul has highlighted.

    Well done and welcome to the site,

    Ben

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    I loved your desciptives! So much said in so few words. Well done and welcome to P &Q-

  • 1 week ago

    by Matt Carroll

    So much said in so few words. Well done.

  • 1 week ago

    by Em

    this might be short but this it is extremely powerful. welcome aboard

  • 1 week ago

    by BlueJay

    The opening line was incredible, it totally pulled me in and the word choice here was definitely powerful. Nicely done for such a simple write, you're really captured not only your emotions but something so overwhelming on the page.

    • 4 days ago

      by Hidden Eyes

      Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

  • 1 week ago

    by mossgirl19

    A striking piece, short but definitely impressed something. Congrats on the win!

  • 1 week ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations on the win!

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations on your front page :)
    Michael

  • 1 week ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 1 week ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your ein

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win! This really was awesome!