Comments : Ones company

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Just love this Michael....'rhetorical diet'....'perpetual purple prose'.... This piece is moments of loneliness described so poetically.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    You failed to mention above that great poetry is also with you. Hey the visuals here are intricately described, created a very silent and vacant atmosphere. Not to mention the pauses of course, you are the master of that. Great write here, Michael.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Wonderful comments Miss Mel Thank you :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    speechless

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em, that's a compliment and the nomination is too again thank you x :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Had to add to my favorite and glad to see it was nominated. Michael I am speechless. All the best hugs my friend

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, nicely done, Glad to see this nominated, Your desciptives were on point.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Matt Carroll

    This is fantastic. Well done.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Michael!
    Loneliness is such an awful emotion and you've given the feel of that just perfectly here. Too many good bits to even pick out a fave line! Brilliant! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty, always lovely words :)x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Justen Smith

    A sad but enjoyably read

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Justen :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Lovely poem so sad

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Paul :)

  • 1 week ago

    by BlueJay

    The flow here is incredible, I couldn't believe I'd already reached the end so I reread the piece about a dozen times. Each time my heart broke a little more. But I feel like the techniques here and the style were all very well used. You had a fantastic rhythm and the way you broke up your stanzas felt perfect. Now on for the loneliness theme, you captured it immaculately. Excellently sorrowfully penned piece.

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Ah Bluejay, thank you for reading and such lovely comments :)x