Comments : Ones company

  • 7 months ago

    by Mark

    Just love this Michael....'rhetorical diet'....'perpetual purple prose'.... This piece is moments of loneliness described so poetically.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    You failed to mention above that great poetry is also with you. Hey the visuals here are intricately described, created a very silent and vacant atmosphere. Not to mention the pauses of course, you are the master of that. Great write here, Michael.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Wonderful comments Miss Mel Thank you :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    speechless

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em, that's a compliment and the nomination is too again thank you x :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Had to add to my favorite and glad to see it was nominated. Michael I am speechless. All the best hugs my friend

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, nicely done, Glad to see this nominated, Your desciptives were on point.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda x

  • 7 months ago

    by Matt Carroll

    This is fantastic. Well done.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Matt

  • 7 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Michael!
    Loneliness is such an awful emotion and you've given the feel of that just perfectly here. Too many good bits to even pick out a fave line! Brilliant! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty, always lovely words :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by Justen Smith

    A sad but enjoyably read

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Justen :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Lovely poem so sad

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Paul :)

  • 7 months ago

    by BlueJay

    The flow here is incredible, I couldn't believe I'd already reached the end so I reread the piece about a dozen times. Each time my heart broke a little more. But I feel like the techniques here and the style were all very well used. You had a fantastic rhythm and the way you broke up your stanzas felt perfect. Now on for the loneliness theme, you captured it immaculately. Excellently sorrowfully penned piece.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Ah Bluejay, thank you for reading and such lovely comments :)x