Comments : Baby bird (for Robyn)

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Brenda this is beautiful. Lovely poem for a special baby bird.

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    My hat dear Brenda.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    oh Brenda this is beautiful and makes me so emotional

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you all. It was written in love from one mom to another.

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I had liked this but for some reason never commented. I just wanted to chime in and say it's heartwarming to see so much support for Andrea and her little dove. This is no exception; well-written, Brenda.

    Much love,
    S

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Miss Brenda

    A beautiful heart-felt tribute and very well put together
    Much love
    Michael x:)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Brenda this is a beautiful tribute and I also believe that it takes a village to raise a child. A absolute wonderful write. All the very best

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Dagmar, Stephen, and Michael, thank you all so much. I'm hoping all the positive vibes we send out help in some small way.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful Brenda. Really x
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by BlueJay

    This is stunning, I think this is one of the best pieces this week for Robyn and Andrea. So glad this was nominated.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you so much Miss Kitty and Maddy! I wish there was more I could do.

  • 1 year ago

    by naaz

    Brenda, It's so good to see that this isn't some random site, it's in actual a community or a small village just as you mentioned. Enriched with beautiful souls, totally strange people who really care for each other. They have love & respect not just for their fellow poets but their families too.
    Hugs to Andrea, her daughter, and her whole family for maintaining their strength while going through hard times.
    Hugs to our fellow poets for sending their prayers to that bird which lives inside Andrea's heart because she is the only reason of what true happiness means to Andrea.
    Hugs to those who wrote, and keep on writing such wonderful tributes to Andrea and her bird in their beautiful language - just as you did, Brenda.
    The most beautiful part of this poem is the theme itself - Robyn.
    Brenda, I read tribute of other poets too.
    Everyone wrote the prayers from their heart, and sent it to Andrea. Like, I wrote from a mother's heart.
    On the other hand, you wrote about Robyn's dreams and desires.
    Brenda, you showed us how Robyn feels, what Robyn sees.
    Through this poem you have told us about her strength that besides all those sufferings
    (The chemotherapy sessions, and all the others which I don't want to mention because her mother is going to read it too)
    Robyn has been through she hasn't given up.
    Though she has not taken her flight for a while yet in her heart she knows that soon she will rise high into the air, and her life will be on its right course once again.
    In this fight, she isn't alone anymore. All of us are with her, holding her hand.
    Though her wings are badly scarred, yet her heart is beautiful - full of hope.
    She still wears the same strength.
    Because she is the daughter of a warrior and she possesses the same heart just like her mother.
    Brenda, an optimistic write!
    And hugs to Andrea from all of us.

    • 1 year ago

      by Brenda

      Naazz, thank you ever so much. As a parent you just want your child to be happy. You want no harm to befall them. My heart is shredded over what's happening.

  • 11 months ago

    by M.U.

    This is really beautiful! I really like it! :)

    • 11 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much!