Comments : Take the edge off

  • 1 week ago

    by Mark

    Brilliant poem, great rhyming Michael, flowing exceptionally well.

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael this is deep and my take on this sounds like hurt and betrayal. Cutting the diamond it could mean either way. Forgiveness is a slow process. We all have a past but we should come clean when with the right one. I may be completely wrong but this write I had to read over. All the very best hugs

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      All so very true my dear Miss Dagmar and thank you :)

  • 1 week ago

    by C Cattaway

    A clever write. I like how you have used the previous to progress onwards. Beautiful.
    Catherine x

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Catherine and for reading my poem :)x

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Your writes are always so varied and well executed, Michael. A real treat to read.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Maher

    Very well written, Mr Michael. I really enjoyed this one - especially the very last verse:

    'I’ve cut the diamond-
    from your
    flaw!'

    That's a great line!

    Stay safe and keep writing, my friend :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr Mayer and for reading means a lot fella :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw brilliant Michael! I just love the way you've expressed what you gained from something bad. It's so clever! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty and yes absolutely :)x