Comments : Everything is You

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This reminds me a little of 'do not stand at my grave and weep' which I'm sure you're familiar with - the content, anyway, not the structure.
    A wonderful poem.

    Ben

    • 2 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Ben I appreciate that.

  • 2 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh my heart

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Frank, I'm at a loss, so well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    'Your death is everywhere.
    Your death is the voice reeds
    spreading
    the tune of passion,
    the voice of man.'

    This verse is my favorite, so much depth in it. I understand what you feel.

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Very powerful piece dd.

    A thread of darkness running through, right until the end. Which it really is

    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Loco4Loco

    this is worded excellently. in darkness and greif, the sadness in this is powerful. I am so sorry for your loss! ..but a beautiful piece.