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by Ben Pickard
This reminds me a little of 'do not stand at my grave and weep' which I'm sure you're familiar with - the content, anyway, not the structure.
A wonderful poem.
Thanks Ben I appreciate that.
by Maple Tree
Oh my heart
Frank, I'm at a loss, so well done-
'Your death is everywhere.
Your death is the voice reeds
the tune of passion,
the voice of man.'
This verse is my favorite, so much depth in it. I understand what you feel.
Very powerful piece dd.
A thread of darkness running through, right until the end. Which it really is
this is worded excellently. in darkness and greif, the sadness in this is powerful. I am so sorry for your loss! ..but a beautiful piece.