Comments : Everything is You

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This reminds me a little of 'do not stand at my grave and weep' which I'm sure you're familiar with - the content, anyway, not the structure.
    A wonderful poem.

    Ben

    • 1 week ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Ben I appreciate that.

  • 1 week ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh my heart

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Frank, I'm at a loss, so well done-

  • 1 week ago

    by mossgirl19

    'Your death is everywhere.
    Your death is the voice reeds
    spreading
    the tune of passion,
    the voice of man.'

    This verse is my favorite, so much depth in it. I understand what you feel.

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Very powerful piece dd.

    A thread of darkness running through, right until the end. Which it really is

    Michael :)

  • 1 week ago

    by C J T

    this is worded excellently. in darkness and greif, the sadness in this is powerful. I am so sorry for your loss! ..but a beautiful piece.