Comments : We All Drown Together

  • 1 week ago

    by ddavidd

    This is a great piece of writing that outlines a grate authority in the subject language.

  • 1 week ago

    by Maple Tree

    Yeah we are...and the lost poets find each other and we talk about life, nature and tipples.

    Love this

    • 1 week ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Tipples have always been one of my favourite topics, Maple, absolutely....

  • 1 week ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Poetry is all about language and you mastered this one. I guess you are right when talking about lost. Take care

  • 1 week ago

    by Guilty By Design

    Oh wow, this is beautifully written. You’re very talented!

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Damn Ben, blown away with your words. Life is hard, getting through a day sometimes is just about impossible. You have put this struggle so eloquently. Hugs my friend-

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Ben

    Wonderful imagery, metaphors and story in your piece.
    The power of the 'molten lava' consuming everything in its path- very well descripted

    Michael :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Em

    Oh my

  • 6 days ago

    by Maher

    Mr Pickard,

    I bet that if P&Q allowed anonymous submissions, I could probably still tell your writings apart from all the rest. Like Joe Satriani and Steve Vai have their signature sounds; you have yours in writing - and what an f-ing sound your writing has.

    Stanzas 2 and 3 have got to be two of the best I've ever read, with this little gem being the heart:

    "and I drown in verse that was never mine to inherit;"

    High school English classes taught us to look for symbolism and the like to find the "true meanings" of the works of famous poets long passed, but I would gladly wake you from the dead to find out this one's true meaning so as not to do it any injustice.

    I only wish it was I who nominated this piece. Keep writing, my friend :)

  • 6 days ago

    by Alice

    Poignant imagery, and an effective way of articulating the struggle. Really loved stanza 2

  • 6 days ago

    by Purvi Gadia

    This is beautiful, uncle Ben. You should really teach me your ways and techniques. It seems magical to me that you tend to always bring out the best in everything.

    • 6 days ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Purvi, but you need no lessons from me.

  • 5 days ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crikey Ben, that mind of yours! This is evocative and powerful. Just amazing! :-) x
    =^.^=