Comments : Dying Wish (Song)

  • 1 week ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ma, you are writing about death lately. I hope everything is well. This is a gripping write...and heart-breaking too.

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mel, glad it moved you. Don't worry, I'll be ok :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful language flowing throughout this sad goodbye ... very touching. :-)
    =^.^=

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      Thank you cat ma'am - glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Mr Mayer

    such a lovely piece of writing that flowed with a delicate touch
    Nice one my friend
    Michael :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      As always, thank you my friend for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Mark

    Your face: my angel's light in life;
    your eyes, the bluest of the skies.

    for you're the coolness of our eyes
    'til past the closing of our lives.

    Ahh lovely words - I felt this deathbed poem

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mark, glad you enjoyed it

  • 1 week ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC this is so sad :(

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      Sorry USB. Didn't mean to upset you

    • 1 week ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Is all ok? :(

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      Don't worry. Just a song :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, oh wow! This is powerfully sad. I'm glad I read down the comments, I got all worried for a minute. Well done-

    • 1 week ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, glad it struck a chord. No need to worry :)

  • 4 days ago

    by Em

    oh my goodness this is deep!!

    • 4 days ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em