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Ma, you are writing about death lately. I hope everything is well. This is a gripping write...and heart-breaking too.
Thanks Mel, glad it moved you. Don't worry, I'll be ok :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
Beautiful language flowing throughout this sad goodbye ... very touching. :-)
Thank you cat ma'am - glad you enjoyed it :)
such a lovely piece of writing that flowed with a delicate touch
Nice one my friend
As always, thank you my friend for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Your face: my angel's light in life;
your eyes, the bluest of the skies.
for you're the coolness of our eyes
'til past the closing of our lives.
Ahh lovely words - I felt this deathbed poem
Thanks Mark, glad you enjoyed it
SC this is so sad :(
Sorry USB. Didn't mean to upset you
Is all ok? :(
Don't worry. Just a song :)
Maher, oh wow! This is powerfully sad. I'm glad I read down the comments, I got all worried for a minute. Well done-
Thanks Brenda, glad it struck a chord. No need to worry :)
oh my goodness this is deep!!