Comments : hurt (revised)

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ohh, nice one Pat. I'm not able to read the first version yet...this one's really good.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Wow. Your words and phrasing make a beautiful write!

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Why do you write so beautifully?