Comments : Awakening

  • 6 years ago

    by Risqué

    This is beautiful. I was held captive for the entire read, and love the last line: ' Somehow, waking felt like a leap of faith gone horribly wrong.'

    So true sometimes.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww. MU, this is beautifully heart wrenching!!! I like the metaphor of dreams, when you thought it was real when it was never. You took me to dimensions. That ending, wow. I wish this is nominated!