Comments : Fell

  • 10 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC - Once again your words have captured my soul. I see a few little hidden things in here that i wont dwell on, but what an excellent piece..

    The opening line - what an amazing way to explain what I hope is rain!
    even the way you describe a shooting star.

    I had to nominate this as it is so amazing and descriptive and everything else. I will also admit i have read it 3 times over.. Its just so amazing (yes that word again!!)

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it so much :)

    • 10 months ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      I really do. After the week ive had and the calls i need to make today - this just made me feel glowy on the inside.

  • 10 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful, Ma. Amazing.

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mel :)

  • 10 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful and swoony Maher! Love it :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Cat Ma'am, glad you like it :)

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fabulous writing, Maher; glad to see it's nominated.

    All the best as ever, good man,

    Ben

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Many thanks as always, Ben. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

      All the very best to you too, good Sir.

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    all I can say is I'm glad it's nominated and as ever I was excite to see a new piece from you and I wasn't disappointed :) well done

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 10 months ago

    by gumshuda

    oh yes, I like this poem.

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Purvi, glad you like it :)

  • 10 months ago

    by Courtney Hough

    I've just discovered you and wish that i had sooner! This is amazing poem with some really good imagery and flow. Loved it.

    • 10 months ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 7 months ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    Being an audience to this poem, this poem swoop me off my feet. Love hurts, doesn't it! And yet, we are pulled towards it like a magnet to a metal. This poem was attractive from the very beginning, it kept catching my free fall in your words, and the ending was fantastic. A beautiful story.

  • 6 months ago

    by Karen Montegrande

    :) i can't help but smile while reading this. VERY WELL DONE Maher!

    • 6 months ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Karen, glad you enjoyed it :)