Comments : Another Sleepless Night

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear Cowgirl you bared my very being in this write. I could have said these very words myself...this is so accurate and spot on I really felt the words as they unfold line by line. Just the right structure too.

    There is nothing wrong in admitting you are exhausted, each of us does. Breathe it out and continue to be strong. ~much love to you~

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      Sweet beautiful Lady :) thank you so much for the amazing comment, nomination, and the love!! I appreciate you so much! <3 and you're right. I will try my best to breathe and be strong, as long as you do, too! Thank you, again!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by RedShadow

    I feel this poem so much. This is totally me.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Maher

    Well.. This is a different side to your hyperactive self, though I've gotta honestly say that this is a good write. Describes me in a way also. Pretending can be very exhausting, but sometimes pretending to be happy makes others happy which in turn makes you happy because your pretend happiness made them happy. Food for thought :)

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      My favorite Aussie :) you make me laugh, lol. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. I suppose as long as the happiness turns out true in the end for both parties, that's what counts :) thanks again!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Damn it - I was going to nominate this piece when I reached the end but that greedy and selfish mossgirl (Mel I think her name is) got there first, lol.

    Sad stuff, Ren, but very well written.

    Take care

    • 2 weeks ago

      by mossgirl19

      Haha... yeah I'm a little bit selfish! Haha.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      LOL, thank you so much Ben! I appreciate it! :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Ren, a very strong write, it is extremely exhausting to try to be another. You really nailed this with this write. Well done-

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much, Brenda!!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em

    This is me to a tee shockingly beautiful in a sad, honest way

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much, Sweet Em <3 hang in there!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by ddavidd

    What a wonderful piece Ren
    and how wonderful it is being able to read your poems again after awhile

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      Aw thank you!! :) I appreciate it so much!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Miss Ren :)

    How lovely to see you back on PnQ with a wonderful, heart-felt poem. The tough times of life, and how we deal with it and you have powerfully come back with an emotional piece of writing.
    Much love and warmth
    Michael :)xx

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ren

      Michael, you're the best, lol. Thank you so much for the sweet comment and the warmth and love. I've missed my wonderful PnQ family!!
      Much love and warmth right back at ya :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Ren, this is so very relatable. Trying to be strong when you don't feel it is so exhausting and the lack of sleep it causes makes it all so much worse! It's a cruel cycle. Wishing you some restful sleep if nothing else! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 1 week ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, sweet Cowgirl! Aww, I'm so happy! This is already a sign you come back for real! We miss your poetry. :-)

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Awww my dear sweet beautiful Mel!! Thank you so so much!! I appreciate the love and the nomination. You're amazing :) I've missed y'all!!!

  • 1 week ago

    by Black hole

    Congratulations!

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Thank you!!

  • 1 week ago

    by Michael

    Ren :)

    So pleased this made front page, well deserved on a brilliant come-back
    Much love
    Michael x :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so so very much dear Michael!! I appreciate it! :) :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Tony

    (<3)
    Pressed

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Thank you, Tony!! :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Maher

    Congrats on the win ya hyper Texan :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Lol, Thank you Maher!!!! :D

  • 1 week ago

    by nani

    My goodness!!! This poem gave me oh so many feels. I absolutely loved this! Please keep writing! Congrats on your poem girl!!!

    Nani

    • 1 week ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much lovebug!!! <3

  • 5 days ago

    by Ben

    Ren....its been a while since i've been on here...but always kept reading and without meaning to sound like an ass or a two sided compliment, your writing (as in the recent posts) seems to have such an impact it is CrAzY gOoD!

    I love this write and as always is filled with vivid images and thought provoking emotions.

    Awesome as always

    Ben x