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  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An incredibly moving write, Michael. You really are producing some marvellous and imaginative work at the moment.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben
      Lovely comments :)

  • 4 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Brilliant work Michael.

    This was a grapefruit poem for me, as much as enjoyed it you can't escape the tinge of bitterness.

    Hope you and yours are all good

    Craig.

    Ps narcissism can only exist in the mind, for to be true to life and yourself "everything means everything" some people don't get that. Hey ho it's their loss.

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Hi fella :)

      yes you are right. Thank you for your comments. All good this end, hope you are too mate :)

  • 4 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Such a well put piece of poetry Michael as always.

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Frank and for reading my poem :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, sadly beautiful. I felt your mood throughout. Well done -

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Michael *sigh* ... so sad and so relatable. Also so beautifully written with lovely artistic metaphors. I sometimes think that 'envy' should be the opposite of 'love' as it kills it every time! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Hey Miss Kitty :) thank you and yes you are probably right x

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    I agree, this is so beautifully written! Another amazing write by you, dear Michael!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Ren :)x