I’m better with a pen

by Eric   Dec 3, 2017


I can always use positive feed back and advice on any poems and quotes I create.
Something blocks my potential I know I have had. Maybe I’m just not inebriated.

Like an ivy killing a tree you smothered me, oops there went my sanity.
But thinking back on it in reality you never really loved me.

You manipulated that so I could only be pushed and shoved
but that was your game not a gift from above.

Ild shed my blood sweat and tears
Just for you to be near?
No. That’s not for us just another fear.
I had to break that mirror.

I’ve never met evil to the core like that.
Twist your soul felt like I was beaten flat.
Then thrown to the ground used like a door mat. I say F that.

I’ve never lift a hand to hurt you.
Open arms I was just showing you I was true.
Now I’m left with feeling blue.
I thought our bond was stronger than glue.

As easy as water washes away beach sand.
I was left high and dry I thought I was your ultimate man.
Losing you was never my plan.
But I’m glad I never took your hand.

I’m available but for only one soulmate.
I don’t jump from ladies just to go date.
Get to know someone it’s not too late.
Can you give me love that will never break?
Probably not. Every relationship until I’m with you has been a mistake
because they were so fake.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I feel like this sometimes, I think everyone does at least once in their life. Great piece

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    love this

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Eric, nicely put. I agree with Dagmar, nothing is guaranteed. I know right now with your heart broken you can't see that huge bullet you dodged. If they are the right one, you will know. Btw, nice rhyming throughout.

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Nothing in life is guaranteed and where love is concerned I feel it is still out there and worth waiting for. I thank you for sharing it made me read more than once. Keep on writing. Add to my favorite. All the very best

  • 6 years ago

    by Eric

    Meant to press copy draft but what do you think

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