Comments : I’m better with a pen

  • 6 years ago

    by Eric

    Meant to press copy draft but what do you think

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Nothing in life is guaranteed and where love is concerned I feel it is still out there and worth waiting for. I thank you for sharing it made me read more than once. Keep on writing. Add to my favorite. All the very best

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Eric, nicely put. I agree with Dagmar, nothing is guaranteed. I know right now with your heart broken you can't see that huge bullet you dodged. If they are the right one, you will know. Btw, nice rhyming throughout.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    love this

  • 6 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I feel like this sometimes, I think everyone does at least once in their life. Great piece