Comments : To Remember

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Super ddavidd!
    This line especially
    "that life is a squashing windmill,
    everything pours down to powder "
    :-)
    =^.^=

    • 1 month ago

      by ddavidd

      Michael, Em, Kitty and beautiful soul, thank you all so much for encouraging words.

  • 1 month ago

    by BeautifulSoul

    This is an interesting write, very creative.

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    lovely write :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Frank,

    this is one of the best I have read, glad to see its been nominated. Fully deserved
    Well done
    Michael :)

    • 1 month ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Michael for the compliment, It truly makes me feel good.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ren

    Wow! Your word choice and descriptions blow me away...well done!

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Well done Frank! I liked your message with this.

  • 1 month ago

    by Black hole

    David, sorry for the late comment. I have no idea you have written this poem for whom.
    It starts with all those beautiful things you mentioned which only love could bring in our life. Whether they are blossoms or fragrances; oxygen or springs; the pallets of Nectar or THE fruits of life.

    David, I am still confused why you let the in uppercase. Could you please solve this mystery?

    Love is all about trust, when you trust someone you are ready to cross borders, no margins or degree can stop you from from reaching the land of truth which is partially hidden in fruits of kisses.

    Then, it shows the concept of life. Life is a squashing mill and how everything it creates has to destroy one day, even emotions or feelings.

    At last everything turns into dust. Some use that to sculpt a face or statues and how one could write a poem around it. Some make buildings out of it by showing us how everything destroys by life creates once again in one form or another, but it happens.

    I don't know but I love one minute detail about this poem. First, you chose the category 'love is' and then you title it 'to remember'. As a whole, it would be read as 'love is to remember'.

    I mean this is really impressive. Only you could have done that. I mean if you can win the weekly contest with just a tiny drop of moon, so here you created the whole universe.
    This is the way universe works, isn't it. It creates and destroys and recreates. Like, we consider ourselves lucky to see a dying star in the sky, we wish upon it too and sometimes we get our wish fulfilled. So, it destroys that star and in turn creates something for us.

    David, I always read your poems. It just I don't have much time to comment on each and every poem, but I always love the magic you create with your words.
    You are one of the finest poet in pnq.
    Your language is as refreshing as a waterfall and Unique as the songs of birds.
    David, love is to remember. I am not sure about the other but you really made it memorable for me.

    All the best!

    • 1 month ago

      by ddavidd

      Dear BH I am speechless. Your words make me feel that all those years of experiencing in the field, like bees gathering flowers zests, to save them in my hives, weren't such a waste of time.
      Love you my friend!!
      Edited:
      "THE" is referred to one of the Christian story about the fruit of life. It has been described as something that if you taste it, everything would pale in compare.
      Not that I'm much religion material, but I adore some parts of Bible, Quran, the book of Mormon, and Avesta. They all have some great poetical and mythological values that one could use them in poetry.

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    You said I see myself in the mirror of poetry but ddavidd you are breathing poetry!!! It naturally exists in you and with you, as this poem proves.

  • 1 month ago

    by ddavidd

    Thank you dearest Liz, Ren, Brenda, Em and Beautiful Soul. What could encourage you more than this fine group of writers liking your words. I appreciate all of you.