Comments : Wispy bones of winter

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful write, Michael, and I have to say, the personification of the trees in the third stanza is astoundingly well done.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you so much Ben :)

  • 4 months ago

    by ddavidd

    What a great descriptive poetical language you have developed my friend. I just enjoyed reading it even without the aid of my wits!!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Frank and for taking time to read :)

  • 4 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael
    Firstly isnt it amazing watching one season change to the next?
    I just love all the little signs in nature.

    Secondly it's amazing you are heading into winter, and we are heading into Summer. Day light savings has hit and days seem sunnier for longer. At the moment it's raining, but when the heat finally hits, we are for a hot few months!

    Back to this beautiful piece of poetry. The stanzas are so wonderfully penned and each has its own little structure describing its own part of nature. from the trees, to the land, to the birds... I truely enjoyed this from begining to end.

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Nams for lovely inspiring comments :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Think of us not as skeletons
    For we are resting life
    We make your air throughout warm times
    But the cold is our respite

    You know that we shall bloom again
    And we will shall shroud the world in green
    Perhaps give you a flower or two
    Their beauty not yet seen.

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, this is just lovely! Your visuals are stunning and just flowed so beautifully. Well done my friend-

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you as always for your comments Miss Brenda :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliant Michael! I so dislike being cold but you see the beauty in even the harsher weather with your amazing descriptives. Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Ah Thank you miss Kitty lovely comments :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Growing up in Germany and it was cold but we all had red cheeks I guess that was the beauty of it. Enjoyed reading. All the very best

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is very beautiful, Michael. Brilliant work.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, Michael!!!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Black Hole :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations Michael! A well deserved win!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    So pleased this hot a win, well deserved

    Craig

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Craig and for your nomination that took it to the front page :)

  • 4 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win Michael!
    Well deserved!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Nams :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by Amrita Singh

    Wow! what a beautiful composition it is :)

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for reading and commenting :)