thankyou MG :) there is often beauty in sadness and sadness in beauty....this is why I love to write, to be able to express it so that others can "feel" it too is an accomplishment.
4 months ago
Such gentle assembling of words. You remind me of the other Ben who left us.
Oh how much more I would enjoy if you finished it by "when I am not with you" instead. For me that, would give more ability to relate to the concept of coldness.
But it is only me. Everyone has his own taste. The piece is already perfect on its own.