Comments : Mine Love (Old Write, Old School)

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I am a fan of everything Old English and when I do come upon a piece I would just appreciate the atmosphere created by the old language. This is just my opinion, but I struggled with some parts of the flow here. Yay, I am not really an expert, I just think for pieces such as this the flow is important to create that atmosphere. I think some of the lines have old words but have modern structure. That aside, your vocabulary here is very rich and exquisite. I adore this nonetheless.

    • 7 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Liz this is the beauty of this piece it combines contemporary with antique in the most beautiful way imaginable in my opinion
      I think Ben has taken this site by storm these week

    • 7 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      He sure did!!!

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    Stunning that is all

  • 7 months ago

    by Chatterbox909 Sphynx

    That's really well written. I love it