I am a fan of everything Old English and when I do come upon a piece I would just appreciate the atmosphere created by the old language. This is just my opinion, but I struggled with some parts of the flow here. Yay, I am not really an expert, I just think for pieces such as this the flow is important to create that atmosphere. I think some of the lines have old words but have modern structure. That aside, your vocabulary here is very rich and exquisite. I adore this nonetheless.