The Stringed Haiku Of Mia Kaori

by Ben   Dec 18, 2017

The taste of winter
Melts on the lips of spring
Watering summers seed

A perfect beauty
Mia Kaori's luminescence
Honours japans soul

The wind sweeps across
The land of the rising sun
Where blossom dances

The Goshawk sings true
Echoing across the vale Kiso
Like Itsuuns autumn

As the lone lotus floats
The komai nestle her roots
So she knows of love.


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  • 6 months ago

    by Fredy

    That first haiku is so amazing.... great work... well deserved nomination

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful imagery. That first haiku in particular is exceptionally stunning. Loved it. Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, absolutely stunning.

  • 7 months ago

    by Purple Raven

    This is an absolutely stunning haiku chain. Probably one of the best I've ever read. Well done.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ben

      Thank you for stopping by and taking the time RS! very much appreciated!

  • 7 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely beautiful and the wording amazing. Glad to see you back on the site no more naughthymouse. All the best.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ben

      Thank you Dearest Dags :) it is nice to be back :)

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