I have to agree with Ben this is so sad but beautifully done
6 months ago
by Ben Pickard
Oh dear. Although love can be the most beautiful and life affirming emotion in the world, the flipside can be desperate. I suppose that's the balance - to have something so wonderful means that when it is lost, the effects are just as dramatic but in entirely the wrong way.
The content is sad to read but the poem is very well written and rhymed.