Comments : Hell...o

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Wow what an inciteful well rhymed piece. So often people are quick to fall in love but then stay far too long after they know it won't work. Cutting your losses in the short term can be painful but it saves much pain and waste of life in the long run. Has to be nominated. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Kris Vigil

      I'm at a loss for words. I came here to vent frustrations, express moods and describe moments. Thank you for nominating my poem

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Kris, this is a lovely rhymed piece expressing feelings which one can relate very much to. Enjoyed it. Glad it's nominated.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kris Vigil

      Much thanks for the kind words

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I love this! Having a moment to think about what was or might have been. I can almost hear you sigh on the last two lines as you let it go. Really well done Kris! :-) x
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