Comments : By Storm

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    A very profound piece with great rhyme and a thought provoking message

  • 7 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The truth so well spoken

  • 7 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh Matt this is brilliant! Wise, wise words indeed. Have you ever read 'Desiderata'? It's along the same profound lines as this.
    Adding to my faves! :-) x

    • 7 months ago

      by Matt Carroll

      I just did, and it is phenomenal. Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

  • 7 months ago

    by Michael


    as a believer in fate, this had me hooked all the way through. I like the way you have expressed how things could turn out, in a great flowing format.
    Well done and I will nominate this.
    Michael :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Breathtakingly good. Full of wisdom a smooth rhyming flowing piece. So glad its been nominated. Best wishes Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Fredy

    Great poem with a good message!

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Great write here, Matt.