My journey (haiku)

by Michael   Dec 22, 2017


Stood at a crossroad
deciding which path to take
well I've come this far

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  • 6 years ago

    by Justen Smith

    In life there are no wrong paths, only the quick way and the one that leaves you a story to tell or writes a saga of defeating a demon.

    A short piece that says so much. Congrats.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Justen :)

      This short piece really says that which ever way we choose at that moment, is the path we experience. Saying I have got this far, is simply saying all the previous decisions I have made, I have made it this far in life so far :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is great Michael! Crossroads in life are so hard but I suppose the important thing is that they signify that we actually have the luxury of choice. Yes you've come this far, so let your gut guide you and cross your fingers :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael bringing back flashlights. Don't lose focus please keep straight. Them detours will get you in trouble. A very deep write. All the best my friend

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, a strong haiku, Michael. To me it suggests we are always facing crossroads but experience has definitely given us wisdom...right or wrong choice we will make it anyway!

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