Comments : cold coffee

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I am very touched and as I am reading it makes me sad and bring back memories. That last part really did it to me. This will go in my favorite list. Welcome back Thomas. All the best

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow. A cutting piece that captures well the physical and maybe mental chaos between two people who may not love each other anymore and yet cannot let go of each other for fear of being alone. Your way with words is amazing. I am more than glad that you are back to PnQ! Welcome home.

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Thomas, I loved this! Your visuals are so raw, it spun this write into that direction of desperation of two souls attempting to even be in the same room with each other and not kill the other one. Well done-welcome back also-I look forward to more of your poems-

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crikey Thomas! What a tragic picture you paint with your words, just lightened by your hints of sarcasm. Excellent! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by Tony

    I don't comment often, but I could not pass this up. Put simply, you moved me.

  • 1 month ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Raw and unique in your visuals. No one can write your experience and perspective but you. Thank you for sharing some of this realness. There's the hesitancy in words unsaid, the stories violently told throughout the apartment, and the underlying fear that somehow unites you both. Powerful.