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by Ben Pickard Dec 26, 2017
Dark, fantasy /
have condensed on your mouth
one too many times,
but the precipitation has never
been enough to drown you -
I will fill that luscious canyon
between your lips with rivulets that run
the gauntlet of your poisonous gullet,
washing every synthetic melody
you ever uttered
Ben Pickard 2017
This really has a different feel Ben. Your word choice here is wonderful and they surely did nicely to give this a chilling effect.
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Mel
by Kitty Cat Lady
Ooh. I can feel the bitterness here Ben. This is almost chilling with the wrath it oozes! Just brilliant :-) x
Loved this Ben, the imagery gave me the shivers...well done!
Thank you, Brenda
by CJ Maleney
Always love the diversity of your work Ben.
Once again this is top notch.
I'm not great at free verse, Craig, but I enjoy trying to change things up a little. Thank you.
Oh my goodness Ben you always write fantastic stuff but this is one of my favourites in a while on here and by you. Your words, your imagery are perfect as ever made me emotional and all goosebumpy
Glad you liked it, Em.
by Scott Cole
by Kireasha L