Comments : To Drown In Condensation

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Dear Ben It is early in the morning and I am reading another one of your fantastic pieces. Wow that's all I can say. All the very best

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Em

    Oh my goodness Ben you always write fantastic stuff but this is one of my favourites in a while on here and by you. Your words, your imagery are perfect as ever made me emotional and all goosebumpy

  • 3 weeks ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Always love the diversity of your work Ben.

    Once again this is top notch.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I'm not great at free verse, Craig, but I enjoy trying to change things up a little. Thank you.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this Ben, the imagery gave me the shivers...well done!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh. I can feel the bitterness here Ben. This is almost chilling with the wrath it oozes! Just brilliant :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    This really has a different feel Ben. Your word choice here is wonderful and they surely did nicely to give this a chilling effect.