Touching on a nerve

by patrick   Dec 28, 2017



Life never stops for death
Its just a hiccup in the main stream of ongoing events
An event, pertinent only to the, sphere of influence
Individuals are touched, affected and memories are ‘set’

Life is a brief window that opens you up to the macro
We have a microscopic perspective of the big picture
A single dot in that collage of confusing conflicting emotions
Everything is anything but ‘the plain truth!

I move seamlessly between my sub personalities
Facets of me taking centre stage
Creating, my attempt to produce meaning to life
I am the centre of my own personal storm, the “eye”

Un-ravelling my own fears and desires
Delving deeply, I seek to justify my curiosity
Sometimes ‘I fake it’ as the disillusioned sceptic
But at my core I see Jesus or Mohammed and all the others
As, giants of thought who are just as befuddled as I

The weak and the strong, the rich and the poor
The war is so long, black and white, yellow and red
What have we done?
Life is this brief window, the only time we have

We prove it all the time, we all bleed red
We all love our children, our families and friends
Our commonality is universal and undeniable
But we hate!

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Such a thought provoking write Patrick! I enjoyed the read and I especially love the 3rd stanza, it is so cleverly put. Great write here.

    • 6 years ago

      by Nicholosa Torres

      Indeed very well written, but no agree to very last line. "But we hate!" For I think hate is a hard word to describe what's been said. But very good nonetheless

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An interesting thought provoking poem. With a different view on life and death. You do raise some interesting points but I disagree with your last line that we all hate. There are people in this world who do hate and this can cause them to perpetuate crimes but for many people it is not an emotion they ever feel. Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Patrick,

    A really interesting read of your perspective.
    Third line (second verse) should it read 'I am' or 'A'
    Enjoyed this
    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by patrick

      thanks i have done the edit

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    More people need to read this. Such an excellent write. We are all people and only one life to live. At the end there is one race called human. All the very best

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