Comments : Never give up

  • 9 months ago

    by C Cattaway

    Ahh.. hope! ;-)
    x

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      Never give up! x

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael

    A nice rhyming piece of your experience with a relationship, which flows really well
    Well done

    Michael :)

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      Thanks very much Michael :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Walter ... I really needed to hear this! I need some good luck, hope and maybe even fate too. Another fabulous flowing piece from you :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      Kitty...Thanks so much and I'm wishing all good luck, hope and fate for you. Just remember that you are wonderful and purrfect! x

  • 9 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ahh, Walter this is an inspiring story! I am touched by it. Good flow, I love it.

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Mel! I'm glad you found it inspiring and I love hearing when things like this story still happen.

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely tale of love and belief in the possibilities and magic of life. Inspirational and captivating. Milly x

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      Thanks kindly for you comments Milly :)x

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      You're too kind...Thanks Em

  • 9 months ago

    by Tony

    I enjoyed reading this. If I could offer some advice it would be to watch the syllable count. You have such an ear for rhyme, but the closer the number of syllables in each line the less stress it will put on the rhymes. The first stanza is spot on, but as you go on the lines get a tad wordy.

    Please keep honing your craft, and telling your stories

    • 9 months ago

      by Walter

      Thanks for your comments Tony and I appreciate you pointing that out. I must admit I wrote this as quickly as I thought about it and it might need more refining.

  • 7 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    The rhyming in this is perfectly done and the whole thing was just beautifully sad