Comments : On arriving home at four in the morning

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Elizabeth, I liked this a lot. You were very honest about your feelings about this person, knowing they still held sway with you to a point but also that they aren't orbiting your heart system like they once did. Well done-

  • 3 months ago

    by hiraeth

    Nominated. :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    Oh wow

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh wow. Really. Amazing piece here, raw feelings intertwined with wonderful metaphors. I am very glad this is nominated.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    Just...wow!

  • 3 months ago

    by Purple Raven

    Wow is right! This poem is unbelievably well written. The metaphors are perfect. If i were a judge i would vote for this poem.

  • 3 months ago

    by Purple Raven

    Congratulations on the win, so well deserved!

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on the win, Elizabeth!

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 3 months ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Beautiful....
    Congrats :) :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Milo

    Congratulations!

  • 3 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations Elizabeth!

  • 3 months ago

    by Milo

    I love metaphors. It's a challenge to continue to build up poem after poems with descriptive metaphors that makes you want to relate in a way that's endearing. Reading your poems this last few weeks is like waiting patiently for Amazon to hurry his/her ass up and deliver my package, I want more. Just an observation, you keep coming up with different but intriguing imagery with the same "white knuckle" phase, and I think it's brilliant. God only knows I don't want to be in that state of mind in real life, I'm suppose to be an adult with normal knuckles ha. Good poem, thank you.

  • 3 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Interestingly penned, seemed more like a letter you
    have penned to this person or you having that conversation
    as he stands afar and listens. Your usage of words and the flow
    \makes this poem so vivid and felt!

    Congrats on the Win!