Comments : Diary Of A Serial Killer (part II)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Tony

    I've waited a week for part II, and as I have come to expect, you did not disappoint.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks, Tony

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This actually reminds me of "Jack the Ripper". Hunting st night and going after streetwalkers. He could not tell himself. Great job with this. Enjoyed and all the very best.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A brilliant follow up to the first part Ben, I loved hearing his thoughts in the aftermath of his dastardly deed. I particularly like the half line, it really speaks of his fragile mental state as he seeks to stay most alive by taking the lives of others, but gives us a glimpse of his vulnerabilities, the very thought of his own mortality spurring him on to kill again straight away.
    Just excellent! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ben, you frighten me! It seems you are a master of dark themes as well. This is briliant and your rhyming is really spot on in whatever you write.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Never my intention, Mel, lol. Thank you, though.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny
    Excellent follow up! I love how oyu went into his immediate after thoughts..
    I cant wait to see if theres more. im officially hooked..

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This is so deliciously creepy and so brilliantly rhymed. I'm hooked and want to keep reading more. You are so talented it takes a great writer to get into the mind of such an evil entity. Well done on part two. Best wishes Milly x

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, absolutely love your next installment. I love the aftermath and his quandary and back and forth. You really have outdone yourself with these. Super gory, spooky, macabre.

    • 1 week ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Brenda - glad you're enjoying them!

  • 1 week ago

    by Stephanie

    Spooky and strong piece, ben

    And yes you scared me once again

  • 1 week ago

    by Em

    Fantastic Ben