A brilliant follow up to the first part Ben, I loved hearing his thoughts in the aftermath of his dastardly deed. I particularly like the half line, it really speaks of his fragile mental state as he seeks to stay most alive by taking the lives of others, but gives us a glimpse of his vulnerabilities, the very thought of his own mortality spurring him on to kill again straight away.
Just excellent! :-) x
This is so deliciously creepy and so brilliantly rhymed. I'm hooked and want to keep reading more. You are so talented it takes a great writer to get into the mind of such an evil entity. Well done on part two. Best wishes Milly x