Comments : The Scent Of You

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm a huge romantic and optimist and I'm hoping that it's all just down to timing and that when the time is right love will come flowing back. As you say it's funny how some scents linger

  • 6 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I wasn't sure about the last line. I've written
    "To be this, for now. I'll make do with your scent."
    But I wonder if it would have been better as
    "To be this. For now, I'll make do with your scent."
    But I live in hope that there may be more in the future, which is why I punctuated it as I did.
    Thoughts are welcome ;-)

    Catherine x