I liked this. I especially liked the fact that you changed nothing within the poem itself and i think that is what makes it special. On a side note, i find is funny that it seems like everyone's first poem is some kind of rhyming one.

I am glad that you did not change anything it is still an original. Adorable.

i really appreciate it Dagmar and Jamie. Thank you for the feedback :)

this one reminds me of my papa and this onemade me smile.